Zalie Burnstein, Age 7
Angell Elementary
Angell Elementary
I was walking through the forest, and I came upon a house. It looked terrifying, but I walked up the steps. As it creaked like a rat hissing, terrified, I opened the door and walked in.
Suddenly, I heard a slam! But, it was just the door as I walked up the steps into the house. But then, I heard a whoosh, but it was only the furnace near the steps. So, I walked on to the next floor, but then I heard a scatter, but it was only a rat, but I was terrified of rats, so I quickly ran to the attic. But, I heard a hooowwwl, but it was just a wolf. But, just in case, I ran to the basement. But then, I saw cake, and I saw eyes and then I heard a voice say: “Go away, this is my cake!!!” So I just ran out of the house screaming and scared.
But then I saw another house, so I walked up the steps and I heard a creak!
Suddenly, I heard a slam! But, it was just the door as I walked up the steps into the house. But then, I heard a whoosh, but it was only the furnace near the steps. So, I walked on to the next floor, but then I heard a scatter, but it was only a rat, but I was terrified of rats, so I quickly ran to the attic. But, I heard a hooowwwl, but it was just a wolf. But, just in case, I ran to the basement. But then, I saw cake, and I saw eyes and then I heard a voice say: “Go away, this is my cake!!!” So I just ran out of the house screaming and scared.
But then I saw another house, so I walked up the steps and I heard a creak!